“I just learned to fly this thing & we’re low on fuel” in The Daily Drunk, Oct. 2022

October 24, 2022

This poem is still available on the publisher’s website.

I’ve been a longtime fan & reader of The Daily Drunk but typically don’t write a lot of pop culture stuff. So when they opened for Oct. I wanted to send a few of my horror movie poems their way & I was lucky enough to have my Dawn of the Dead sonnet-esque poem picked up.

I started writing this free verse & then realized I had some slant rhymes & played around with it until I had an abab, cdcd, efef, gg format.

I just learned to fly this thing & we’re low on fuel*

It’s really over & in the end, what left us was our minds
they lifted the soft anchors that kept us tethered to ourselves,
to our lovers, to a new season of dresses that defined
who we were for a day with an accuracy that compelled

a cough, a stutter, a language that spoke with a bite, it came
with a chasm of ills, a system of escape routes, it came
on the release of a patriotic whoop. Our hunger claimed
us, defined us, never enough wars or steak dinners or blame

to fill all the soft parts of us that squelch between the teeth.
Empty bellies wage war & famine raises the hardest hands
& excess is a heavy head over the weakest shoulders that feeds
on the brittle bones that raised it. What I mean is you can

feed them or you can let them starve & folks will do as they do –
sense is a hard-sell pitch & brains are a commodity too.

*this poem is inspired by “Dawn of the Dead” (1978)